tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33595714.post3884375566993411033..comments2023-12-02T18:39:25.382+08:00Comments on 新春秋 PANDEMONIUM: 邇來Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33595714.post-529153671889471862007-11-14T19:06:00.000+08:002007-11-14T19:06:00.000+08:00多謝你的意見!鄙作蹇淺,竟蒙褒獎,意料之外也.又遲了回覆,抱歉!愚惟玉露雖然工穩,但有違我的本意(揶...多謝你的意見!鄙作蹇淺,竟蒙褒獎,意料之外也.又遲了回覆,抱歉!愚惟玉露雖然工穩,但有違我的本意(揶揄最近人人熱心之事),況且字面稍近俗調, 故此割棄矣.易之為薤露如何?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-33595714.post-6662032972782095422007-11-10T07:25:00.000+08:002007-11-10T07:25:00.000+08:00筆落湧泉,心歸淨境,先生之詩可誦也。惟"頓升雞犬瓊華界, 相望夔蚿幻中身"一聯,中字應仄;況瓊華幻中...筆落湧泉,心歸淨境,先生之詩可誦也。惟<BR/>"頓升雞犬瓊華界, 相望夔蚿幻中身"一聯,中字應仄;況瓊華幻中,稍嫌失對,和壁其必有瑕乎。若以玉露對瓊華,庶可協聲而存意也。先生高鑑。Y.T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12990019119299338300noreply@blogger.com